Re: [PATCH 4/4] doc: omit needless "for"

2016-12-11 Thread Philip Oakley
From: "Philip Oakley" diff --git a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt index 72ca9c1ef..22309cfb4 100644 --- a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt +++ b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ you want to understand Git's internals. The core Git i

Re: [PATCH 4/4] doc: omit needless "for"

2016-12-11 Thread Philip Oakley
From: "Kristoffer Haugsbakk" Sent: Friday, December 09, 2016 3:51 PM What was intended was perhaps "... plumbing does for you" ("you" added), but simply omitting the word "for" is more terse and gets the intended point across just as well, if not more so. After some thought, I think the origin

[PATCH 4/4] doc: omit needless "for"

2016-12-09 Thread Kristoffer Haugsbakk
What was intended was perhaps "... plumbing does for you" ("you" added), but simply omitting the word "for" is more terse and gets the intended point across just as well, if not more so. I originally went with the approach of writing "for you", but Junio C Hamano suggested this approach instead.