Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-uta-tls-attacks-04

2014-10-18 Thread Yaron Sheffer
Hi Jari, Yes, the editorial comments are on my TODO for the next version. And thanks Meral! Best, Yaron On 10/16/2014 07:36 AM, Jari Arkko wrote: Thanks for your review. (Have the authors seen the editorial nits? None of them are significant to worry about, but just wanted to ensure

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art LC review: draft-ietf-uta-tls-bcp-08

2015-02-02 Thread Yaron Sheffer
Hi Robert, Peter, I don't recall a previous discussion of DTLS 1.0. But after looking at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Datagram_Transport_Layer_Security#Implementations, I agree that we should mandate DTLS 1.2 and make DTLS 1.0 a SHOULD NOT, similarly to older versions of TLS. Thanks,

Re: [Gen-art] review: draft-sheffer-rfc6982bis-00

2016-04-22 Thread Yaron Sheffer
Hi Joel, Thanks for your review! I would appreciate an example of an existing RFC that documents an implementation, so we can refer to it in the text. Best, Yaron On 04/22/2016 09:05 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: Interesting. I was looking at bullet 4 in section 3, which reads "At lea

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-jwt-bcp-04

2019-04-13 Thread Yaron Sheffer
Hi Brian, Thank you for your review! Your comments are addressed by the following commit: https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/commit/d00674b352f6e1323da8c5b6600f1f0d7e9b64b1 Please let us know if any issues remain. Best, Yaron On 30/03/2019 23:51, Brian Carpenter via Datatracker wrote: R

Re: [Gen-art] Genart review of draft-sheffer-running-code-04

2013-04-24 Thread Yaron Sheffer
Hi Christer, thanks for your review! The current (rather vague) wording is: In addition, this section can contain information about the interoperability of any or all of the implementations. We could add: "including references to interoperability reports, when such exist." Thanks,

Re: [Gen-art] Genart review of draft-sheffer-running-code-04

2013-04-24 Thread Yaron Sheffer
Sure. Thanks, Yaron On 2013-04-24 15:45, Christer Holmberg wrote: Hi, Could you say something like "including references to test case descriptions and interoperability reports, when such exist."? Regards, Christer -Original Message----- From: Yaron Sheffer [mailt

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-dh-checks-04

2013-05-13 Thread Yaron Sheffer
Hi Dan, Thanks for your review! We initially chose a cleaner solution which would have required draft merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool to depend on the current one. The authors of that other draft requested this change so that they can move forward to publication. I agree it's not ideal, but this ba

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-acme-star-06

2019-08-02 Thread Yaron Sheffer
‎Thank you for the review Meral! On 02/08/2019 10:14, Meral Shirazipour wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other l

Re: [Gen-art] [Id-event] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-09

2020-06-05 Thread Yaron Sheffer
Hi Mike, I'm looking at the latest PR, specifically at the Poll document. I can see that you changed the text around signing SETs, but I don't see any new (or existing) text that requires HTTPS as you noted in your response to Robert. I even see this new text "If SETs are transmitted over unenc

Re: [Gen-art] [Id-event] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-09

2020-06-05 Thread Yaron Sheffer
it. If you like, I could clarify that this should never occur. -- Mike -----Original Message- From: Yaron Sheffer Sent: Friday, June 5, 2020 8:26 AM To: Mike Jones ; Robert Sparks ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: last-c...@ietf.org; draft-ietf

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06

2021-04-09 Thread Yaron Sheffer
We have already addressed the GenArt comments, thank you Suresh! I will respond to Lars's review separately. Yaron On 4/6/21, 15:52, "Lars Eggert" wrote: Suresh, thank you for your review. I have entered a Discuss ballot for this document based on my own review. Lars >

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525bis-07

2022-05-27 Thread Yaron Sheffer
Thank you Tim! Opened two issues, https://github.com/yaronf/I-D/issues?q=is%3Aissue+is%3Aopen+label%3ABCP195 Yaron On 5/28/22, 00:17, "Tim Evens via Datatracker" wrote: Reviewer: Tim Evens Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. T