Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-roll-applicability-home-building-08

2015-03-23 Thread peter van der Stok
HI Meral, Thanks for the suggestions. I have no problem with any of them. I think they are quite justified. Thank you very much for pointing them out. Concerning scene and group control. I may suppress the word "scene". About [occuswitch] I have to look for a valid alternative. However, these

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-roll-applicability-home-building-08

2015-03-23 Thread peter van der Stok
me. Once you've done that, we'll hand it over to Alvaro as the incoming AD, and he can put it on an IESG telechat. Cheers, Adrian -Original Message----- From: peter van der Stok [mailto:stokc...@xs4all.nl] Sent: 23 March 2015 14:49 To: Meral Shirazipour Cc: draft-ietf-roll-app

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-roll-applicability-ami-12

2016-04-29 Thread peter van der Stok
Hi Christer, thanks for the review. Do you propose to change the standards track objective to informational? Peter Christer Holmberg schreef op 2016-04-29 11:48: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-core-etch-02

2016-09-28 Thread peter van der Stok
Hi Christer, Thanks for your suggestions and comments. A bit late reaction due to holidays. See my answers below. It is not excluded that my co-author may refine (improve) my answers. Peter Christer Holmberg schreef op 2016-09-20 13:34: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For

Re: [Gen-art] [Anima] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-09

2022-04-11 Thread Peter van der Stok
Hi Ines, Many thanks for your review. Please see inline comments below. Greetings, Peter Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: On the Right Track I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG

Re: [Gen-art] [Anima] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-09

2022-04-11 Thread Peter van der Stok
Hi Michael, I liked the reference to RFC6550 because it shows that other RFCs provide the same modes; and it was argued to standardize only one mode. Peter Michael Richardson schreef op 2022-04-11 20:04: The document defines a mechanism to assign a Device (Pledge) to a (anima) domain, repre

Re: [Gen-art] [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-10.txt

2022-04-28 Thread Peter van der Stok
Dear reviewers, Can you verify that the recently published version 10 of the constrained-join-proxy draft correctly addresses your reviews as discussed on the mailing list? many thanks, greetings, Peter Peter van der Stok schreef op 2022-04-14 09:28: This version 10 includes the results