Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-16

2014-11-24 Thread Michael Sweet
lain once where it shouldn't. > (The thing in the [] should be RFC7235, not 4): >> [RFC7234] Fielding, R., and J. Reschke, "Hypertext Transfer Protocol >> (HTTP/1.1): Authentication", RFC 7235, June 2014. >> > > > > > > > _ Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review: draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-17

2014-12-02 Thread Michael Sweet
IETF RFC formally updating one of their > documents, that's their process, not ours, no? And FWIW, the sections in question currently reference RFC 3510 along with the various TLS RFCs. At some point in the next year we will be updating IPP/2.0 to full IEEE standard, at which point

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-sweet-rfc2911bis-09

2016-07-26 Thread Michael Sweet
t; or "example.net" in the URL. Consider: > > (404) http://ftp.example.com/pub/ipp-model-v11-990510.pdf This is actually a real link to an (old) archived draft of the original RFC 2911, but I can update it to be a fake example.com URL... > In Section 5.3.7, the reference

Re: [Gen-art] Telechat Review of draft-sweet-rfc2910bis-08

2016-08-05 Thread Michael Sweet
ay "in a special position as described in Section > 3.1.1". Works for me, changed. > Nits/editorial comments: > > * idnits complains that this document is attempting to reference > "rfc2910bis" (this document) without declaring the reference. > Thes