Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-08-29
IETF LC End Date: 2013-08-29
IESG Telechat date: 2013-09-12
Summary:
This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have
some comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
Nits:
-[Page 4], line 2, "attributies" --typo--&g
: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-08-29
IETF LC End Date: 2013-08-29
IESG Telechat date: 2013-09-12
Summary:
This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have
some comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
Nits:
-[Page 4], line 2, "attributies" --typo--&g
Hi,
Thank you for the clarifications. I have no more comments.
Best Regards,
Meral
From: Murray S. Kucherawy [mailto:superu...@gmail.com]
Sent: Thursday, August 29, 2013 11:34 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: draft-ietf-repute-query-http@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Gen-ART
spfbis-4408bis-19
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-09-04
IETF LC End Date: 2013-09-02
IESG Telechat date: 2013-09-12
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard.
Nits/editorial comments:
Section E.3., Title, "Receving ADMDs" --typo--> "
repute-query-http-10
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-09-05
IETF LC End Date: 2013-08-29
IESG Telechat date: 2013-09-12
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard.
Nits:
-[Page 6], line 2, "An media"--typo-->"A media"
Best Regards,
-
spfbis-4408bis-20
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-09-19
IETF LC End Date: 2013-09-02
IESG Telechat date: 2013-09-26
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard but I have
minor comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 12], section 3, one line from the examp
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-10-10
IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-10
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I do have some
editorial comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 4], is there a reason to use both "seq_num field
Hi,
Thank you David.
Best Regards,
Meral
From: David McGrew [mailto:mcg...@cisco.com]
Sent: Thursday, October 10, 2013 6:10 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org;
robert.cra...@gridmerge.com
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of
Hi,
Thank you, that will be great.
Best,
Meral
From: Robert Cragie [mailto:robert.cra...@gridmerge.com]
Sent: Thursday, October 10, 2013 2:02 PM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: David McGrew; draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc@tools.ietf.org;
gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call
Hi Robert,
Yes I saw that and replied to this older one by mistake. Thank you for the
re-correction.
Best,
Meral
From: Robert Cragie [mailto:robert.cra...@gridmerge.com]
Sent: Sunday, October 13, 2013 2:41 PM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: David McGrew; draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc
-hosts-03
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-10-18
IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-18
IESG Telechat date: 2013-10-24
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC but I do have some comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
Overall the draft was a bit hard to read but given the long time
Hi,
Thank you Robert.
Best,
Meral
-Original Message-
From: Robert McMurray [mailto:rob...@microsoft.com]
Sent: Thursday, October 24, 2013 9:05 AM
To: Jari Arkko; Meral Shirazipour
Cc: draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [Gen-art
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-10-25
IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-25
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC but I do have some
comments.
Major issues:
none
Minor issues:
none
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 3], Section 1
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq .
Please resolve any Last Call comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-p1-messaging-25
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq .
Please resolve any Last Call comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-25
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq .
Please resolve any Last Call comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-25
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review
Hi,
Thanks Mark.
Best Regards,
Meral
-Original Message-
From: Mark Nottingham [mailto:m...@mnot.net]
Sent: Thursday, December 05, 2013 7:23 PM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: HTTP Working Group; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-25
Hi Meral
imple implementation? I
think it is worthwhile spending minimum 2-3 pages to summarize the various
documents (Parts) and suggest how to use them best.
"
Best Regards,
Meral
-Original Message-
From: Julian Reschke [mailto:julian.resc...@gmx.de]
Sent: Friday, December 06, 2013 1:37 AM
Hi Julian,
Thanks for the reply. Please see inline.
Best Regards,
Meral
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> -Original Message-
> From: Julian Reschke [mailto:julian.resc...@gmx.de]
> Sent: Sunday, December 08, 2013 1:51 AM
> To: Meral Shirazipou
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-01-02
IETF LC End Date: 2014-01-16
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
editorial comments (mostly nits).
Nits/editorial comments:
Nits:
-[Page 3] Introduction, line 4, "PW s&qu
Hi Greg,
Thank you for considering, it looks very good to me.
Best,
Meral
From: Gregory Mirsky
Sent: Thursday, January 02, 2014 2:56 PM
To: Meral Shirazipour; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: RE: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-tp-cv-adv-03
Dear Meral,
many thanks for your kind
Hi,
Many thanks, looks great.
Best,
Meral
From: Gregory Mirsky
Sent: Thursday, January 02, 2014 4:08 PM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: RE: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-tp-cv-adv-03
Hi Meral,
just published the updated version.
Kind
f-pwe3-mpls-tp-cv-adv-04
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-01-19
IETF LC End Date: 2014-01-16
IESG Telechat date: 2014-01-23
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
Best Regards,
Meral
---
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Ericsson Research
www.ericss
-synchronization-07
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-02-04
IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-04
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
minor comments.
Major issues:
N/A
Minor issues:
N/A
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 4], Section 1.4
: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-02-14
IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-14
IESG Telechat date: 2014-02-20
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
editorial comments .
Nits/editorial comments:
Suggestion: I noticed that Unsigned32 is used with 16 bit
rblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-08
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-02-19
IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-04
IESG Telechat date: 2014-02-20
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Standards Track RFC.
Best Regards,
Meral
---
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Ericsson
Research
www.ericss
-l2vpn-vpls-mib-14
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-02-14
IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-14
IESG Telechat date: 2014-02-20
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
editorial comments .
Nits/editorial comments:
It was noticed that Unsigned32 is use
Hi,
Thank you again Kiran, it works for me.
Best,
Meral
From: Agrahara Kiran Koushik [mailto:kkous...@cisco.com]
Sent: Wednesday, February 19, 2014 3:34 PM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mib@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Telechat Call review of
-08
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-02-28
IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-28
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I have a few
comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[page 3] "an prank emergency"--a-->"a prank e
-ecrit-trustworthy-location-09
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-03-26
IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-28
IESG Telechat date: 2014-03-27
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Informational RFC.
Best Regards,
Meral
---
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Ericsson Research
www.ericss
-10
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-03-28
IETF LC End Date: 2013-03-28
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 3], "A third metric (Severely Concealed Seconds)"--suggestion-->&qu
-conceal-10
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-03-28
IETF LC End Date: 2014-03-28
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 3], "A third metric (Severely Concealed Seconds)"--suggestion-->&qu
rblock-rtcp-xr-loss-conceal-11
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-04-04
IETF LC End Date: 2013-03-28
IESG Telechat date: 2014-04-10
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Best Regards,
Meral
---
Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericss
-04
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-05-06
IETF LC End Date: 2014-05-07
IESG Telechat date: 2014-05-15
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as BCP RFC but I have some editorial
comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 2], Section 1, "Because the owner of the URI (as de
: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-06-02
IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-03
IESG Telechat date: 2014-06-12
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC but I have some editorial
comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 5], Section 2, typo , "identifes"-->"identifies&
Hi Les,
Thank you for the changes and explanations.
Best Regards,
Meral
From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) [mailto:ginsb...@cisco.com]
Sent: Monday, June 02, 2014 6:10 PM
To: Meral Shirazipour; draft-ietf-isis-fs-lsp@tools.ietf.org;
gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: RE: Gen-ART Last Call review of
sis-fs-lsp-02
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-06-09
IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-03
IESG Telechat date: 2014-06-12
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC.
Best Regards,
Meral
---
Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
Research
www.ericss
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-06-23
IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-23
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I have some
comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 8], Section 4.1
"the commitment of the shared resources a
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-07-02
IETF LC End Date: 2014-07-04
IESG Telechat date: 2014-07-10
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC, but I have some
comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
- Abstract Suggestion to spell out SIP and B2BUA (Back-to-Back User
ginal Message-
> From: Jari Arkko
> Sent: Monday, July 07, 2014 10:09 PM
> To: Meral Shirazipour
> Cc: draft-ietf-straw-sip-traceroute@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org;
The
> IESG
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-straw-sip-
> traceroute-02
>
aw-sip-traceroute-02
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-06-09
Review Date: 2014-07-02
IETF LC End Date: 2014-07-04
IESG Telechat date: 2014-07-10
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC, but I had some
comments during LC.
Nits/editorial comments:
-please see LC
: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-07-23
IETF LC End Date: 2014-07-23
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC, but I have some
comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-Abstract says "thus saving up to one full round trip time (RTT)": by jus
Hi,
Thanks Yuchung, I agree with your suggestions.
Best Regards,
Meral
From: Yuchung Cheng [mailto:ych...@google.com]
Sent: Tuesday, July 29, 2014 10:22 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: draft-ietf-tcpm-fastopen@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review draft-ietf
ls-smp-requirements-08
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-08-06
IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-23
IESG Telechat date: 2014-08-07
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Informational RFC .
Best Regards,
Meral
---
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Research
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: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-08-08
IETF LC End Date: 2014-08-08
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 12], "entry with with"--typo-->"entry with"
-[Page 13], "when the the age&qu
f-core-observe-14
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-08-08
IETF LC End Date: 2014-08-08
IESG Telechat date: 2014-08-21
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC.
Please see LC review:
http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg10474.html
Best Regards,
f-tcpm-fastopen-09
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-07-22
IETF LC End Date: 2014-07-23
IESG Telechat date: 2014-08-21
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC.
Please see LC review:
http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg10403.html
Best Regards,
: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-08-22
IETF LC End Date: 2014-08-22
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC but I have some comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 6], Section 4.1, typo: "A noted in Section 1">"As noted in S
Hi,
Thank you.
Best Regards,
Meral
From: Bocci, Matthew (Matthew) [mailto:matthew.bo...@alcatel-lucent.com]
Sent: Tuesday, August 26, 2014 3:04 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour; draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er@tools.ietf.org;
gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last review Call draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er
3-mspw-er-05
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-08-22
IETF LC End Date: 2014-08-22
IESG Telechat date: 2014-09-04
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Please see LC review:
http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg10531.html
Best R
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-09-29
IETF LC End Date: 2014-09-29
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC .
Nits/editorial comments:
Nits:
-Abstract, please consider smelling out Security Assertion Markup Language
-[Page 4] Section 2.1
-oauth-saml2-bearer-21
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-10-10
IETF LC End Date: 2014-09-29
IESG Telechat date: 2014-10-16
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC .
Nits/editorial comments:
Please see LC review :
http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/c
: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-10-10
IETF LC End Date: 2014-10-13
IESG Telechat date: 2014-10-16
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, but I have some
editorial comments .
Nits/editorial comments:
Nits:
-Abstract, please spell out Transport Layer Security (TLS
ta-tls-attacks-04
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-10-10
IETF LC End Date: 2014-10-13
IESG Telechat date: 2014-10-16
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, but I had
some editorial comments .
Please see LC review:
http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/g
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-10-27
IETF LC End Date: 2014-10-27
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
comments .
Nits/editorial comments:
Nits:
-[Page 3] Section 1, "an SP may">"a SP may&qu
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-11-07
IETF LC End Date: 2014-11-10
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
editorial comments .
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 1], Abstract, suggestion: please spell out CAPWAP
-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri-07
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-11-24
IETF LC End Date: 2014-10-27
IESG Telechat date: 2014-11-25
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have
some comments .
Minor issue:
->
page [Page 8]:
"
- Range 0x41-0x
; Meral Shirazipour
Cc: ero...@juniper.net; draft-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri@tools.ietf.org;
gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of
draft-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri-07
I just posted the -09 version of the draft, which has the requested changes
(including most of
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-11-29
IETF LC End Date: 2014-12-09
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
comments .
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 1], Abstract section, please remove the
Hi Tom,
Thank you for considering the comments. Please see inline.
Best Regards,
Meral
> -Original Message-
> From: Tom Yu [mailto:t...@mit.edu]
> Sent: Friday, December 05, 2014 6:02 PM
> To: Meral Shirazipour
> Cc: draft-ietf-kitten-cammac@tools.ietf.org; g
Hi,
I am ok either way, as gen-art reviewer it was not clear to me that the
server MUST fail the authentication process.
Best Regards,
Meral
> -Original Message-
> From: Simo Sorce [mailto:s...@redhat.com]
> Sent: Saturday, December 06, 2014 9:30 AM
> To: Meral Shirazipo
t-ietf-opsawg-capwap-hybridmac-07
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-12-11
IETF LC End Date: 2014-11-10
IESG Telechat date: 2014-12-18
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Best Regards,
Meral
---
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-09
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-12-25
IETF LC End Date: 2014-12-25
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC but I have some
comments.
Minor issues:
-Not sure about this, [page 1] says Updates: 2865, 6158, 6929 (if approved).
Can an
kitten-cammac-00
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-01-05
IETF LC End Date: 2014-12-09
IESG Telechat date: 2015-01-08
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I had
[1] some comments (mostly nits).
[1] http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/ms
Hi,
Thank you, sounds great.
Best Regards,
Meral
> -Original Message-
> From: Benjamin Kaduk [mailto:ka...@mit.edu]
> Sent: Monday, January 05, 2015 1:01 PM
> To: Meral Shirazipour
> Cc: draft-ietf-kitten-cammac@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: Gen
Hi,
Many thanks. Looks good to me.
Best Regards,
Meral
From: Alejandro Perez Mendez [mailto:a...@um.es]
Sent: Friday, January 09, 2015 1:02 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour;
draft-ietf-radext-radius-fragmentation@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of
draft
: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-01-14
IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-14
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
comments .
Nits/editorial comments:
-Please spell out acronyms at first use. E.g. JSON, I-JSON
-[Page 3], "tre
radext-radius-fragmentation-10
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-01-19
IETF LC End Date: 2014-12-25
IESG Telechat date: 2015-01-22
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC.
Best Regards,
Meral
---
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Research
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json-i-json-05
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-01-19
IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-14
IESG Telechat date: 2015-01-22
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I had
some comments [1] .
[1] http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg11198.html.
Hi,
I have not heard from the authors. My 2nd and 3rd comments on [page 3] would
need more attention.
Best ,
Meral
> -Original Message-
> From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.ar...@piuha.net]
> Sent: Thursday, January 22, 2015 3:38 AM
> To: Meral Shirazipour
> Cc: draft-i
Hi Tim,
thanks for considering, please see inline.
Best Regards,
Meral
On 01/22/2015 06:13 PM, Tim Bray wrote:
On Wed, Jan 14, 2015 at 1:00 AM, Meral Shirazipour
<mailto:meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com>> wrote:
Nits/editorial comments:
-Please spell out acronyms at
f-ippm-ipsec-08
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-02-07
IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-09
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as a Standards Track RFC, but I
have some small comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 4], Section 1, last two paragraphs: Althou
Hi,
Thank you.
Best,
Meral
From: Kostas Pentikousis [mailto:k.pentikou...@eict.de]
Sent: Wednesday, February 11, 2015 8:56 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour; draft-ietf-ippm-ipsec@tools.ietf.org;
gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: AW: Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-ippm-ipsec-08
Dear Meral
tpauth-basicauth-update-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-02-19
IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-19
IESG Telechat date: 2015-02-19
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have
some comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 4], "the definition of t
Hi,
Thank you.
Best Regards,
Meral
-Original Message-
From: Julian Reschke [mailto:julian.resc...@gmx.de]
Sent: Thursday, February 19, 2015 9:55 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour; draft-ietf-httpauth-basicauth-update@tools.ietf.org;
gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Telechat Call
ls-lsp-ping-registry-02
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-03-04
IETF LC End Date: 2015-03-02?
IESG Telechat date: 2015-03-05
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have
some comments.
Minor issues:
-[Page 3], Section 2.1, Table "Registry Nam
-building-08
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-03-21
IETF LC End Date: 2015-03-23
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
comments.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 1], "RPL" fir
van der Stok [mailto:stokc...@xs4all.nl]
Sent: Monday, March 23, 2015 12:18 PM
To: adr...@olddog.co.uk
Cc: consulta...@vanderstok.org; Meral Shirazipour;
draft-ietf-roll-applicability-home-building@tools.ietf.org;
gen-art@ietf.org; Alvaro Retana
Subject: RE: Gen-ART Last Call review of
f-roll-applicability-home-building-09
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2015-03-23
IESG Telechat date: 2015-04-09
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Best Regards,
Meral
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-ipsec-09
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-09
IESG Telechat date: 2015-04-09
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as a Standards Track RFC.
Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
Research
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Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-04-16
IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-16
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but it has some nits.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 1], Abstract, "those those specifi
: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-05-11
IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-28 on version -10 (this is a post deadline LC
review/apologies)
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I have some
comments .
Nits/editorial comments:
- Not sure if the
-13
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-05-15
IETF LC End Date: 2015-05-15
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
comments .
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-The abstract lacks context
) [mailto:rmoh...@cisco.com]
Sent: Monday, May 18, 2015 10:04 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour;
draft-ietf-rtcweb-stun-consent-freshness@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org;
rtc...@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of
draft-ietf-rtcweb-stun-consent-freshness-13
Hi Meral,
Thanks for your feedback. See
Hi,
Thank you for the replies.
Best Regards,
Meral
-Original Message-
From: Ram Mohan R (rmohanr) [mailto:rmoh...@cisco.com]
Sent: Tuesday, May 19, 2015 7:50 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: draft-ietf-rtcweb-stun-consent-freshness@tools.ietf.org;
gen-art@ietf.org; rtc...@ietf.org
rtcweb-stun-consent-freshness-13
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-05-25
IETF LC End Date: 2015-05-15
IESG Telechat date: 2015-05-28
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I had
some comments .
Nits/editorial comments:
Please see LC review threads
-nfsv4-layout-types-03
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-05-25
IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-16
IESG Telechat date: 2015-05-28
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but it has
some nits.
Nits/editorial comments:
Please see LC review:
https://www.ietf.or
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-06-11
IETF LC End Date: 2015-06-11
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
I found the draft a bit hard to follow as the incentive was not
Hi,
That is perfect, thank you. I think since the LC was June 11 you can publish
a new version with any other comments you received from LC.
Best,
Meral
From: Pierre Pfister [mailto:pie...@darou.fr]
Sent: Friday, June 12, 2015 7:09 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: draft-ietf-homenet-prefix
-10
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-06-29
IETF LC End Date: 2015-06-29
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-Please consider spelling out acronyms at first use.
Best
omenet-prefix-assignment-07
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-07-07
IETF LC End Date: 2015-06-11
IESG Telechat date: 2015-07-09
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Best Regards,
Meral
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f.org; Meral Shirazipour
Subject: Re: [homenet] Objection to late change in
draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment
Pierre,
Thanks for the prompt reply. I am not too worried about the process issue, and
I do understand why that whole paragraph was added (I've added Meral in cc).
Your explanati
: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-07-07
IETF LC End Date: 2015-07-09
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC, some editorial
comments below.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 3], Section 2.1, "The GRE ingress
onsent-freshness-15
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-07-15
IETF LC End Date: 1) 2015-05-15 2)2015-07-16
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
Best Regards,
Meral
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Hi,
Please refer to first LC[1] for previous comments.
Best Regards,
Meral
[1] http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg11686.html
From: Muthu Arul Mozhi Perumal [mailto:muthu.a...@gmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, July 15, 2015 9:04 PM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: draft-ietf-rtcweb
Hi,
I did, also went through the diff v14 and 15 and as the gen-art review said
no more comments.
Best,
Meral
From: Ram Mohan R (rmohanr) [mailto:rmoh...@cisco.com]
Sent: Thursday, July 16, 2015 8:31 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour; Muthu Arul Mozhi Perumal
Cc: draft-ietf-rtcweb-stun-consent
: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-07-29
IETF LC End Date: 2015-07-29
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
comments .
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-Abstract, suggestion:
"uses Trickle"
Hi,
Thank you for the changes.
Best,
Meral
-Original Message-
From: Markus Stenberg [mailto:markus.stenb...@iki.fi]
Sent: Wednesday, August 05, 2015 12:58 PM
To: Meral Shirazipour
Cc: draft-ietf-homenet-dncp@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of
ntarea-gre-ipv6-11
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date:2015-08-06
IETF LC End Date:2015-07-09
IESG Telechat date: 2015-08-06
Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Er
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-08-13
IETF LC End Date: 2015-08-13
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC; I have some
editorial comments.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 4], "which either
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