Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-call-flows-13.txt

2013-09-09 Thread Lorenzo Miniero
Brian, thanks for the review! We'll add those elements to the terminology section. About the "Mealy automaton", rather than adding a reference to pages like Wikipedia, I'd go for an inline indication to the reader. Would it be ok to add the "finite state automaton" in brackets after the text wher

[Gen-art] Latest nits on the call flows doc

2013-09-17 Thread Lorenzo Miniero
me. > > Regards >Brian > > On 12/09/2013 21:41, Jari Arkko wrote: > > Brian: Thank you for your review, and thank you Lorenzo for taking > > these comments into account. I have balloted No-Objection for this > > document. > > > > jari > >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-rtcp-13

2016-10-11 Thread Lorenzo Miniero
Hello Russ, sorry for this late reply... thanks for reviewing the document! As to the points you raised in your review, I've added a couple of comments inline. On Mon, 3 Oct 2016 15:26:30 -0400 Russ Housley wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review T

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-rtcp-15

2016-11-29 Thread Lorenzo Miniero
On Fri, 25 Nov 2016 15:30:30 -0500 Russ Housley wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD before po

Re: [Gen-art] IESG comments on draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-rtcp

2016-11-30 Thread Lorenzo Miniero
Hi Ben, Yes, I've seen Alvaro's, Alia's, Alissa's and your comments yesterday, but I didn't have time to address them yet. I'll try to do this when I get to the office so that this can be discussed. Thanks, Lorenzo Il 30 novembre 2016 22:30:32 CET, Ben Campbell ha scritto: >Hi, > >In case peo