[Gen-art] review: draft-boucadair-rfc6153-update-01

(Discovered I had not sent this to the list when I did it. Sorry.) I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comment

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-qoe-12

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-qoe-12 R

Re: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-roll-admin-local-policy-03 (was -02)

This is a re-review of -03 of this document. While I find it slightly odd, upon consideration I believe the statement that turning this protocol on is the administrative control required by the definition of admin-local scope is sufficient, and thus addresses my original concern. If for some

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-stox-groupchat-10

[Saw this on the tlechat list, and realized that I messed up and sent the review only to Jean, and not to the Gen-Art list.] I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please res

Re: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-scim-use-cases-06

Version -06 is sstill ready for publication as an informational RFC. Yours, Joel On 3/30/15 4:39 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please res

Re: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-jose-jwk-thumbprint-05

The document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Upon re-review, the addition of section 3.4 raises a question of clarity. As written, the text says that the hash function matters only to the original thumbprint provider. Should there be a little bit of text talking abou

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-lwig-cellular-05

This document is still ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Yours, Joel On 8/13/15 10:13 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Ple

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-uta-email-tls-certs-07

as of -07, this document is still ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Yours, Joel PS: This reviewer takes no position on the technical adequacy of the text addressing the issue of mail servers hosting large numbers of domains. On 11/24/15 2:40 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: I am the a

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-codec-oggopus-10

to cover all needed cases? Yours, Joel Halpern ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

[Gen-art] review: draft-sheffer-rfc6982bis-00

[Resending with the summary line filled in] I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more informati

[Gen-art] review: draft-sheffer-rfc6982bis-01

This revision (-01) represents a reasonable effort to address my concerns. My thanks to the author. The document is ready for publication as a BCP Yours, Joel M. Halpern On 4/22/16 12:10 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Tea

[Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-0

Version -09 of this document is still ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Yours, Joel M. Halpern On 5/13/16 4:18 AM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IES

[Gen-art] Review: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp-websocket-13

Version -13 of this document is still ready for publication as a Proposed Standard Yours, Joel On 6/16/16 5:24 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06.txt

This document is still ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. (I think I even see why the reference in section 3.3 is point to 2.1.) Yours, Joel On 7/5/16 6:26 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews al

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-bbf-bbf-urn-02

The new version addresses my concerns and is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Yours, Joel M. Halpern On 10/14/16 4:51 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by

[Gen-art] Review of draft-mohali-dispatch-cause-for-service-number-12

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues Major: This document defines a new code for use in SIP, and specifies new behavior both for the code itself and for its use in history-info. I am thus confused as to how this can be an informational RFC. It looks like it either

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-bfcpbis-sdp-ws-uri-07

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-09

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-11

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-18

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-anima-grasp-09

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-time-format-03

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-time-format-04

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-08

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-unique-ipv6-prefix-per-host-02

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-grasp-11

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-09

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-grasp-12

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-unique-ipv6-prefix-per-host-03

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pals-p2mp-pw-lsp-ping-03

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-webpush-vapid-03

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-urnbis-ns-reg-transition-08

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5280-i18n-update-02

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-v6ops-unique-ipv6-prefix-per-host-07

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pce-initiated-lsp-10

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-05

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-cubic-06

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5280-i18n-update-03

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rmcat-scream-cc-11

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-certificates-15

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-intarea-probe-07

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-10

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-06

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-11

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-lsa-extend-20

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-12

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-03

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-04

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Not Ready This is an early gen-art review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-04. The document is clear about what it is trying to do, and readable. It is not clear about how it expects this to actually work. However, I find the underlying concept confusing. 1

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-18

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-object-security-08

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: On the Right Track I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-vendor-channel-00

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-uta-smtp-tlsrpt-17

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-19

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-uta-smtp-tlsrpt-18

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-06

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Not Ready This is both a gen-art re-review and a routing directorate requested review. The revisions from draft-04 to -06 show some improvement. However, I still have serious problems with this work. The primary problem is that this seems to violate the

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-02

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-12

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-10

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-11

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-object-security-13

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-12

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-object-security-14

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-06

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-08

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-14

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-11

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-cdn-loop-01

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-hash-of-root-key-cert-extn-03

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-trans-rfc6962-bis-31

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-6man-rpl-option-04

[Resend with the right author address.] I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Docum

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-l3vpn-ospfv3-pece-09

[Produced for histories sake, since it is OBE.] I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive

[Gen-art] Review: draft-sandlund-rfc4996bis-02

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-sandlund-rfc4996bis-02 RObust

Re: [Gen-art] [savi] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-savi-threat-scope-05

Antiquity lives on. This draft is back from the dead. Somehow, it made it to the IESG review without my finishing addressing your comments. My apologies for that. I am trying to finish this off. You will see Monday afternoon a new draft in the repository, with a section 4.1.2 on LACP, and

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-savi-threat-scope-06

] Received: Tuesday, 26 Mar 2013, 7:45pm To: Ted Lemon [ted.le...@nominum.com] CC: McPherson, Danny [dmcpher...@verisign.com]; Fred Baker [f...@cisco.com]; Joel Halpern [joel.halp...@ericsson.com]; gen-art@ietf.org [gen-art@ietf.org]; Jean-Michel Combes [jeanmichel.com...@gmail.com]; s...@ietf.org [s

Re: [Gen-art] [savi] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-savi-threat-scope-06

; From: Ted Lemon [mailto:ted.le...@nominum.com] > Sent: Wednesday, March 27, 2013 10:57 PM > To: Joel Halpern Direct > Cc: Black, David; Joel M. Halpern; McPherson, Danny; > s...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org; Jean-Michel > Combes; Joel Halpern > Subject: Re: [savi]

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-ipv6-options-08

clarifications inline @SB On Wed, Jun 29, 2022 at 1:39 AM Joel Halpern via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

objects. Note an IETF MIB model for IPsec was never standardized however the structures here could be adapted to existing MIB implementations. Doses that suffice? Thanks Don -Original Message- From: Joel Halpern via Datatracker Sent: Wednesday, September 21, 2022 6:50 PM To: gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-11

cell kvau...@trevilon.com www.trevilon.com <http://www.trevilon.com/> On Feb 9, 2023, at 6:56 PM, Joel Halpern via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF

Re: [Gen-art] [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-srpm-11

.txt Please see replies inline with On Mon, May 8, 2023 at 7:42 PM Joel Halpern via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents

Re: [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-05

, 2023 4:23 PM To: Joel Halpern ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: b...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast@ietf.org Subject: RE: Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-05 Hi Joel, Thanks for your review and comments. I will address them and come back. Jeffrey -Original Message

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof-08

introduction as well, we can fix it with the RFC editor. Thanks & Cheers Bala'zs -Original Message----- From: Joel Halpern via Datatracker Sent: Tuesday, December 19, 2023 3:39 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: det...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.or

Re: [Gen-art] [Bier] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-tether-04

point.  It just works.) Yours, Joel On 2/15/2024 11:04 PM, Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang wrote: Hi Joel, Thanks for your review and comments. Please see zzh> below. Juniper Business Use Only -Original Message- From: BIER On Behalf Of Joel Halpern via Datatracker Sent: Thursday, February

Re: [Gen-art] [Bier] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-tether-04

s.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-bier-tether-04&url2=draft-ietf-bier-tether-05&difftype=--html Thanks. Jeffrey Juniper Business Use Only -Original Message- From: Joel Halpern Sent: Thursday, February 15, 2024 11:27 PM To: Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: b...@ietf.or

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11

b.io/ipfix-tcpoptions-and-v6eh/genart-review/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh.txt -Message d'origine----- De : Joel Halpern via Datatracker Envoyé : vendredi 3 mai 2024 05:01 À : gen-art@ietf.org Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh@ietf.org; last- c...@ietf.org; ops...@ietf.

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype-04

Michael, as far as I know, the request to IANA is not removed from the RFC, although the IANA registry is definitve from then on. Also, the fact that the HTML rendering of the draft is unreadable does seem to be a problem.  And if Guy is correct that the descriptions are insufficient (as I pre

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pals-ple-08

hope this addresses your comments. The changes with respect to 1) are included in the -09 version I just uploaded to data tracker Regards Christian On 11.10.2024, at 16:34, Joel Halpern via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewe

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-11

1:22 AM, Dhananjaya Rao (dhrao) wrote: Hi Joel, Thanks very much for your careful review. We have submitted (v-12) with updates to address your comments. Please also see inline (DR#) for some responses. *From: *Joel Halpern via Datatracker *Date: *Saturday, February 1, 2025 at 3:08 PM *To:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-domain-sequence

Thank you for the reply. Comments in line. Yours, Joel On 10/30/15 4:46 AM, Dhruv Dhody wrote: Hi Joel, Thanks for a review. See inline... On Fri, Oct 30, 2015 at 2:42 AM, Joel M. Halpern mailto:j...@joelhalpern.com>> wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-certificates-15

2017, at 14:56, Joel Halpern wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other las

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-object-security-08

On 2/23/18 5:26 AM, Göran Selander wrote: Hi Joel, Thanks for your review. Comments inline. On 2018-02-22 04:51, "Joel Halpern" wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews al

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