Francis, thanks a lot for your review.
Francesca
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Hi Al,
Thanks for your reply.
I cut selected parts of the email to detail some of my comments, see inline.
Francesca
> > (About MUST, was there any specific reason not to use the updated
> > boilerplate referencing RFC8174?)
> >
> [acm]
> You mean the Requirements Language RFC has been updated?
Hi Al,
Thanks for addressing my comments, it looks good.
Francesca
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Hi Joel,
Thanks for your review! I now have updated the draft with improvements from
your comments, see inline. Hope this clarifies.
Thanks,
Francesca
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Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
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Thanks Chris, these changes address my review comments.
Francesca
On 04/11/2018, 19:55, "Chris Wendt" wrote:
Thank Francesca for the review. Comments inline.
> On Nov 2, 2018, at 12:14 PM, Francesca Palombini
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Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
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g 26, 2019 at 5:44 PM Francesca Palombini via Datatracker
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Looks good Pascal. Thanks for your quick update!
Francesca
On 31/01/2020, 10:55, "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" wrote:
Hello Francesca:
Many thanks for your review : )
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication. However, I
noticed the
> normative ref
Hi Elwyn,
Thank you so much for your review. We have now worked on all your comments in a
pull request, and will soon submit an update to the document. All the nits are
adressed in two commits:
https://github.com/ace-wg/ace-oscore-profile/commit/a7f9483e96107a678b80217ba0b2d3dcfb488192
and
h
Hi Elwyn,
Thank you very much for the in depth review! We have incorporated your changes
in the newly submitted v-18
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-oscore-profile-18 , but
you can also see the specific changes in the github:
https://github.com/ace-wg/ace-oscore-profile/co
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