Re: [Gen-art] Genart review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model-11

2013-09-30 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
Hi Christer, Thanks for the rewiew. v12 of the drafts should solve your comments. General: --- Q_G_1: The document says "ITU-T recommendation G.XXX", "ITU-T G.XXX", and "G.XXX". Please use consistent terminology. Authors> ITU-T recommendation G.XXX used o

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art LC review draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ospf-g709v3-09

2013-10-15 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
Hi Robert, Many thanks for your review. Please find comments/replies in line. BR Daniele (& co-authors) From: Robert Sparks [mailto:rjspa...@nostrum.com] Sent: venerdì 11 ottobre 2013 17:16 To: General Area Review Team; cc...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ospf-g70...@tools.ietf.org Subject:

Re: [Gen-art] [CCAMP] Gen-Art LC review draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ospf-g709v3-09

2013-11-22 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
n -11. But maybe I missed it. Has that been incorporated to the latest version? (I thought your text suggestion looked fine.) Jari On Oct 15, 2013, at 5:21 AM, Daniele Ceccarelli wrote: > Hi Robert, >  > Many thanks for your review. Please find comments/replies in line. >  >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label-04

2015-09-08 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
Hi Robert, Thanks for the careful review and your comments. I pretty much agree with Adrian's reply but I think explicitly having some backward compatibility text in the draft could be helpful. Adrian, authors, I'd suggest changing section 5 from "Manageability Considerations" to "Backward Co

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label-04

2015-09-09 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
flexi grid but for the time being let's be on the safe side and address the compatibility issue as you're suggesting. Cheers, Daniele > -Original Message- > From: Adrian Farrel [mailto:adr...@olddog.co.uk] > Sent: martedì 8 settembre 2015 18:02 > To: Daniele Cecca

Re: [Gen-art] [CCAMP] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label-04

2015-09-09 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
:julien.meu...@orange.com] > Sent: mercoledì 9 settembre 2015 10:53 > To: Daniele Ceccarelli; adr...@olddog.co.uk; 'Adrian Farrel'; 'Robert Sparks'; > draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-la...@ietf.org; cc...@ietf.org; 'General > Area Review Team'; i...@ietf.org >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ATR review of draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-07

2016-10-17 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
Hi Jouni, Thanks a lot for your review and your thoughts. I tend to agree with you, publishing a document referencing a future one doesn't make much sense. We had a long discussion inside the WG on how to progress this draft with many alternative options and this one happened to be the less pain

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

2017-02-06 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
Hi Jari, Pete, First of all thanks for the accurate review. All the nits/editorial comments are correct and will be fixed. Regarding the minor issue: > 4.1.1: > > The figure is a bit confusing: There might not exist a "Max Slot Width at > Priority > 7" if bit 7 is clear in the Priority field

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

2017-02-07 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
Hi Pete, We’re getting there. Please see in line for further explanation. Thanks a lot Daniele From: Pete Resnick [mailto:presn...@qti.qualcomm.com] Sent: lunedì 6 febbraio 2017 18:38 To: Daniele Ceccarelli Cc: Jari Arkko ; gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

2017-02-08 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
doesn't need to >say anything about local configurations. For me it’s ok not to say anything on that. Thanks Daniele From: Pete Resnick [mailto:presn...@qti.qualcomm.com] Sent: martedì 7 febbraio 2017 18:05 To: Daniele Ceccarelli Cc: Jari Arkko ; gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ccamp-f

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

2017-02-09 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
Gone! ☺ Thanks to you for the careful review. BR Daniele From: Pete Resnick [mailto:presn...@qti.qualcomm.com] Sent: giovedì 9 febbraio 2017 01:08 To: Daniele Ceccarelli Cc: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org; cc...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen