Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15

2022-03-04 Thread Cigdem Sengul
Dear Theresa, Thank you very much for the comments. I have prepared a revised version, where the changes can be found in the following pull request: https://github.com/ace-wg/mqtt-tls-profile/pull/99 If you are happy with these changes, I can submit a new ID. I also explain the changes below, in

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15

2022-03-05 Thread Cigdem Sengul
Hello, I've created a new pull request for the changes: https://github.com/ace-wg/mqtt-tls-profile/pull/101 Explanations are below. > > > > > [CS: Introduced a formal definition of Network Connection to > > > MQTT-related terminology - as defined in MQTT standard. > > > To the Will definition, add