[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-multi-tlv-10

2025-03-04 Thread Peter Yee
Les, Perfectly fine by me. That suggestion was something that came up just reading through the abstract and was meant for someone who was reading that paragraph alone. It does become clear later that it must be per TLV based on the main body text. -Peter On 3/4/25, 4:

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-multi-tlv-10

2025-03-04 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
Peter - Thanx very much for your review. I have made all the suggested editorial changes except one. I will upload V11 of the draft once the submission window reopens on March 16. Regarding your first comment: > Page 1, Abstract, 1st sentence: I’d append “per TLV” at the end of the > sentence

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-must-not-sha1-03

2025-03-04 Thread Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mo

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-multi-tlv-10

2025-03-04 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more inf

[Gen-art] Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-multi-tlv-10

2025-03-04 Thread Aijun Wang
Hi, Peter:Would you like to review https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-wang-lsr-unsolved-challenge-of-mp-tlv/ to find out some “Major Issues” that are related this document?It doesn’t need the solid background of IS-IS to get the key challenges that are existing in the document.Or. Would you lik