[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-38

2025-02-09 Thread C. M. Heard
Greetings, Many thanks for the review. The principal author and I will work to get these issues into the github tracker and addressed. Before doing that I would like to address this point: On Sun, Feb 9, 2025 at 1:38 PM Robert Sparks

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sipcore-callinfo-rcd-13

2025-02-09 Thread Roni Even via Datatracker
Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information,

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-11

2025-02-09 Thread Joel Halpern
I have looked at the diffss, and I would ask for one further clarification.  You edited the definition of "Transport Network" to say "A network that comprises of multiple cooperating domains managed by one or more operators".  There is a trivial grammar problem, and I would ask for a few words