Hi Robert,
thank you for your review. Please, see inline.
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the
> IETF Chair. Pleas
also inline.
On 12/9/24 7:34 AM, Valery Smyslov wrote:
Hi Robert,
thank you for your review. Please, see inline.
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being p
Dan,
Version -14 incorporates the two changes below, updates Albert's email
address, and adds instructions to IANA as flagged during their review.
-- Jeff
On Sat, Dec 07, 2024 at 01:08:39AM +0200, Dan Romascanu wrote:
> Your proposals are acceptable for me.
>
> Regards,
>
> Dan
>
>
> On Sat,
Please, see inline as well (and I deleted parts where we are in agreement).
> Small touches like this are an improvement. Please skim through all the bare
> SHOULDs (and SHOULD NOTs) to see if something similar should be said.
I'll try to do my best.
> >> 7th paragraph of 2.3.3 fails to parse at
Hi Med,
Thanks for the responses and changes, these are helpful and address my
review comments.
Best,
Reese
On 12/6/24 23:43, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote:
Hi Reese,
Thank you for the review.
All good points. A diff can be seen at:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?url_1=http
