[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-large-packets-13

2024-12-06 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mo

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-large-packets-13

2024-12-06 Thread Dan Romascanu
This is fine with me, maybe this is worth explaining in text. Regards, Dan On Fri, Dec 6, 2024 at 5:31 PM Reshad Rahman wrote: > Hi Dan, > > Thanks for the review. One response inline. > > On Friday, December 6, 2024 at 04:21:35 AM EST, Dan Romascanu via > Datatracker wrote: > > > Reviewer:

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-large-packets-13

2024-12-06 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi, Thanks for the quick response. Please see in-line. Regards, Dan On Fri, Dec 6, 2024 at 5:59 PM Jeffrey Haas wrote: > Dan, > > On Fri, Dec 06, 2024 at 01:21:33AM -0800, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker > wrote: > > This is a clear, well-written document. It is almost Ready with one > minor

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-large-packets-13

2024-12-06 Thread Dan Romascanu
Your proposals are acceptable for me. Regards, Dan On Sat, Dec 7, 2024 at 1:00 AM Jeffrey Haas wrote: > Dan, > > On Sat, Dec 07, 2024 at 12:23:02AM +0200, Dan Romascanu wrote: > > On Fri, Dec 6, 2024 at 5:59 PM Jeffrey Haas wrote: > > > In other words, the implementations know the use cases

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-11

2024-12-06 Thread Reese Enghardt via Datatracker
Reviewer: Reese Enghardt Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mor

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-large-packets-13

2024-12-06 Thread Jeffrey Haas
Dan, On Sat, Dec 07, 2024 at 12:23:02AM +0200, Dan Romascanu wrote: > On Fri, Dec 6, 2024 at 5:59 PM Jeffrey Haas wrote: > > In other words, the implementations know the use cases best for their > > deployments.. > > Maybe a short text would clarify. It was not obvious for me, but it may be > my

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-large-packets-13

2024-12-06 Thread Reshad Rahman
Hi Dan, Thanks for the review. One response inline. On Friday, December 6, 2024 at 04:21:35 AM EST, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) re

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-large-packets-13

2024-12-06 Thread Jeffrey Haas
Dan, On Fri, Dec 06, 2024 at 01:21:33AM -0800, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker wrote: > This is a clear, well-written document. It is almost Ready with one minor > issue > (which may be just a clarification issue) and a couple of editorial nits. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > 1. Section

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-13

2024-12-06 Thread Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more informa

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-11

2024-12-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Reese, Thank you for the review. All good points. A diff can be seen at: https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?url_1=https://boucadair.github.io/attachment-circuit-model/draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue.txt&url_2=https://boucadair.github.io/attachment-circuit-model/reese-review/draft-i

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-13

2024-12-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Behcet, Thank you for the review. Appreciated. This will be ACKed in the next iteration. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker > Envoyé : vendredi 6 décembre 2024 18:21 > À : gen-art@ietf.org > Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac@ietf.org; l