[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-daley-gendispatch-venue-requirements-02

2024-07-04 Thread Jay Daley
Hi Dan Sorry for the delay in replying. Thanks for the detailed review - responses inline. > On 13 Jun 2024, at 11:01, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker > wrote: > > 1. The document uses in Section 3.3 the term 'viable meeting'. I do not see it > defined in RFC 8718 or RFC 8719. I believe that t

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-name-encoding-08

2024-07-04 Thread Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mor

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-name-encoding-08

2024-07-04 Thread Dino Farinacci
> Major issues: None Thanks for your review Jouni. > Minor issues: > 1) Section 7 Security Considerations is a bit thin.. aren't there anything a > rogue host could do? Well, a rogue host can only register name mappings if it has the authentication keys for a given map-server. So its not the na

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-05

2024-07-04 Thread Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more informa

[Gen-art] ?? How to review document clusters ??

2024-07-04 Thread Paul Kyzivat
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-05 On 7/4/24 2:39 PM, Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker wrote: ... This document is part of a cluster of four which together specify a credit-base flow control extension to DLEP. ... I just reviewed one of

[Gen-art] Re: [Last-Call] Re: Genart last call review of draft-daley-gendispatch-venue-requirements-02

2024-07-04 Thread John C Klensin
--On Thursday, July 4, 2024 13:34 +0100 Jay Daley wrote: >... >> Does this really need to be mentioned as a disadvantage of meeting >> spaces not co-located with a hotel, normally a convention centers? >> Is this something that really resulted as rough consensus from the >> discussions? What is

[Gen-art] Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-daley-gendispatch-venue-requirements-02

2024-07-04 Thread Jay Daley
John > On 4 Jul 2024, at 22:30, John C Klensin wrote: > > > > --On Thursday, July 4, 2024 13:34 +0100 Jay Daley > wrote: > >> ... >>> Does this really need to be mentioned as a disadvantage of meeting >>> spaces not co-located with a hotel, normally a convention centers? >>> Is this somethin

[Gen-art] Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-daley-gendispatch-venue-requirements-02

2024-07-04 Thread John C Klensin
--On Thursday, July 4, 2024 22:35 +0100 Jay Daley wrote: > John > >> On 4 Jul 2024, at 22:30, John C Klensin wrote: >> >> >> >> --On Thursday, July 4, 2024 13:34 +0100 Jay Daley >> wrote: >> >>> ... Does this really need to be mentioned as a disadvantage of meeting spaces not c

[Gen-art] Re: ?? How to review document clusters ??

2024-07-04 Thread Dale R. Worley
Paul Kyzivat writes: > I just reviewed one [document of a cluster]. And this isn't the first > time I've reviewed [one] of a cluster like this. > > It bothers me that he genart/artart reviews of the documents in such a > cluster don't take the related nature of the documents in a cluster. Convers

[Gen-art] Re: [Last-Call] Re: Genart last call review of draft-daley-gendispatch-venue-requirements-02

2024-07-04 Thread Toerless Eckert
On Thu, Jul 04, 2024 at 06:38:04PM -0400, John C Klensin wrote: > >> 'When the meeting space is co-located with the IETF hotel, > >> the combination tends to build a strong sense of community > >> among those participants and staff who stay there. That > >> sense is diminished when the hotel and c