Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-auth-announce-06

Hi Paul, On Mon, Apr 1, 2024 at 9:08 AM Valery Smyslov < s...@elvis.ru> wrote: I've added the following sentence to the Introduction: Since IKEv2 doesn't allow to use multiple authentication methods and doesn't provide means for peers to indicate to the oth

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-auth-announce-06

I can live with that.PaulSent using a virtual keyboard on a phoneOn Apr 2, 2024, at 03:10, Valery Smyslov wrote:Hi Paul, On Mon, Apr 1, 2024 at 9:08 AM Valery Smyslov wrote: I've added the following sentence to the Introduction:   Since IKEv2 doesn't allow to use multiple   authen

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-auth-announce-06

Hi Valery, Thank you for the response and updates. Please see inline: On 4/1/24 06:08, Valery Smyslov wrote: Abstract: As a non-expert reader, the following phrases appear to contradict each other: "indicate the list of supported authentication methods" sounds like different algorithms, "conf

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-07

Hi Peter, Thank you for such a detailed review. I'm still struggling with fixing the drawing, so I'm going to spend more time on it. All other comments have been addressed (well, will be as soon as we submit -08), except for this one: > Page 14, section 13, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: append a