Re: [Gen-art] [Bier] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-tether-04

2024-02-16 Thread Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang
Hi Joel, I posted the -05 revision. Besides the proposed text below, I also added an IANA request for the "BIER Helped Node" sub-TLV type for OSPFv3 - I had missed that. https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-bier-tether-04&url2=draft-ietf-bier-tether-05&difftype=--html Thanks. J

Re: [Gen-art] [Bier] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-tether-04

2024-02-16 Thread Joel Halpern
Thank you.  That looks good. Joel On 2/16/2024 11:06 AM, Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang wrote: Hi Joel, I posted the -05 revision. Besides the proposed text below, I also added an IANA request for the "BIER Helped Node" sub-TLV type for OSPFv3 - I had missed that. https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddi

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-21

2024-02-16 Thread Kent Watsen
Hi Mallory, Thank you for your valuable comments. Please find responses below. Kent > On Feb 13, 2024, at 5:00 PM, Mallory Knodel via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Mallory Knodel > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >

Re: [Gen-art] [Tvr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tvr-use-cases-04

2024-02-16 Thread Yingzhen Qu
Hi Behcet, Thanks for the review. We've published version -05 to address your comments, please see my answers below inline. Thanks, Yingzhen On Thu, Feb 15, 2024 at 10:05 AM Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya > Review result: Ready with Nits >

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-ssh-client-server-37

2024-02-16 Thread Kent Watsen
Hi Elwyn, Thank you for your valuable comments. Please find responses below. PS: language used that implies that something has been fixed (e.g., Fixed!) Should always be read to mean “fixed in my local copy (in git) and will be part of the next published update, which will likely occur early next