[Gen-art] Please withdraw

2023-10-06 Thread Martin Duke
I have pulled back https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-pam/ from last call because it came to my attention that some of my requested changes did not, in fact, make it into the published draft. Please defer your reviews until I return the document to IETF Last Call. I apologize for the

Re: [Gen-art] Please withdraw

2023-10-06 Thread Martin Duke
The authors addressed my issue unusually quickly, so the current version is now ready. Sorry again for the churn. On Fri, Oct 6, 2023 at 11:32 AM Martin Duke wrote: > I have pulled back https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-pam/ > from last call because it came to my attention that s

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-intarea-rfc7042bis-09

2023-10-06 Thread Dale Worley via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more i