[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slices-21

Reviewer: Reese Enghardt Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mor

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slices-21

Thanks Reese, Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. All comments accepted and addressed except... > Please consider redrawing the figures using SVG instead of ASCII. > Especially Figure 4 would greatly benefit from this enhancement. I think Figure is about as complex as they get, and

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-ospfv3-extensions-07

Reviewer: Mallory Knodel Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mor

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-evpn-aggregation-label-10

Hi Russ, Thanks for your review and comments. Please see zzh> below. Juniper Business Use Only -Original Message- From: Russ Housley via Datatracker Sent: Friday, June 30, 2023 11:34 AM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: b...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-evpn-aggregation-label@ietf.org; la