Re: [Gen-art] [Ext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22

On Mar 28, 2023, at 9:27 AM, Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker wrote: > Nits/editorial comments: > a) I managed to find in this well written document one typo: > > Section 6 > > we would like to > sincerely apolgized for anyone who we forgot to credit > > apologize Thanks; fixed. > b) Lack o

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03

Hi Dan, thanks so much for taking the time to review, here are our comments: >> I would consider mentioning explicitly 'SIP trunking' in the Description of >> the 'sip-trunking-capability' link relation in the registry. We went back and forth with how best to incorporate an explicit call out to

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03

Hi Derek, Thank you for responding and addressing the comments in my review. As stated these were 'Nits' level comments, so I have no problems with your resolutions. This is a good document and can go ahead, from my perspective. Regards, Dan On Mon, Apr 10, 2023 at 7:43 PM Derek Engi (deengi)

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec-10

Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more i

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec-10

On Mon, 10 Apr 2023, Ines Robles via Datatracker wrote: The document is well written and easy to read. Thanks :) Nits/editorial comments: Section 3.2: "198.51.0/24" --> "198.51.100.0/24" ? Fixed in -11. Question: Section 2.1, the Security Label should be at least of one octet. Is there

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-taps-interface-20

Reviewer: Thomas Fossati Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For m

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec-10

Many thanks Paul for addressing my comments Best Regards, Ines On Tue, Apr 11, 2023 at 12:32 AM Paul Wouters wrote: > On Mon, 10 Apr 2023, Ines Robles via Datatracker wrote: > > > The document is well written and easy to read. > > Thanks :) > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > > Section 3.2: "