Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread Robert Sparks
On 2/20/23 12:42 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: Hi Robert, Thank you for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med -Message d'origine- De : Robert Sparks via Datatracker Envoyé : vendredi 17 février 2023 21:30 À : gen-art@ietf.org Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns.

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread Bernie Volz
Robert:IANA follows the rules to make these assignments.See https://www.iana.org/assignments/bootp-dhcp-parameters/bootp-dhcp-parameters.xhtml162OPTION_V4_DNRNEncrypted DNS Server[RFC-ietf-add-dnr-13]And https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters/dhcpv6-parameters.xhtml144OPTION_V6_DNRYesNo

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-null-register-packing-13

2023-02-21 Thread Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mo

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-null-register-packing-13

2023-02-21 Thread Behcet Sarikaya
Hi Alvaro, On Mon, Feb 20, 2023 at 9:25 AM Alvaro Retana wrote: > On February 17, 2023 at 11:17:10 AM, Behcet Sarikaya wrote: > > > Behcet: > > Hi! Thanks for your review! > > > ... > > Flag Bit 7 in PIM common header is defined as Capability bit but in > Figure 1 > > and throughout the draft

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Robert, Thanks for the follow-up. Bernie has provided the context for 162/144 codes. For your second comment, a first attempt to tweak the text can be seen at: https://tinyurl.com/opsawg-add-latest. This may be tweaked a little bit for better readability. Cheers, Med > -Message d'

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread Robert Sparks
Thanks Bernie, I found and pointed to exactly those assignments already. IANA doesn't proactively read all works in progress to make registrations. That particular draft doesn't even ask them to make the registration before it is published as an RFC. _Someone_ did. Where in the process/rules

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread Bernie Volz
Section 9 of https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-add-dnr/13/ does indeed request those assignments. And given that RFC-editor is working on converting this into an RFC, IANA must make the assignments for the RFC to be published. - Bernie (from iPad) > On Feb 21, 2023, at 10:54 AM, moha

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread Robert Sparks
On 2/21/23 11:47 AM, Bernie Volz wrote: Section 9 of https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-add-dnr/13/ does indeed request those assignments. And given that RFC-editor is working on converting this into an RFC, IANA must make the assignments for the RFC to be published. Ah - I missed t

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Re-, > Ah - I missed that draft-ietf-add-dnr was already in the RFC Ed > Queue. :-) I consider that this issue is fixed. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Robert Sparks > Envoyé : mardi 21 février 2023 18:52 > À : Bernie Volz ; BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET > > Cc : gen-art@iet