Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-null-register-packing-13

2023-02-17 Thread Behcet Sarikaya
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-17 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mo

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-17 Thread Alan DeKok
On Feb 17, 2023, at 3:29 PM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote: > Nit: The discussion in paragraph 3 of section 3 and the note that follows are > currently ambiguous. When it calls out that 2865 limits the size of DHCP > options and that 7499 and 7930 relaxes the limit, is it only trying to inf