Re: [Gen-art] [tcpm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc8312bis-14

2022-12-20 Thread Vidhi Goel
Thank you for the review. Response to nits below: > * Perhaps it would be nice to add a subsection in Section I, to explain the > update to RFC5681 There is a small paragraph that covers this. From the draft, Based on the extensive deployment experience with CUBIC, it also moves the specification

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-18

2022-12-20 Thread Christer Holmberg via Datatracker
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mor