[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-15

2022-11-17 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mo

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-15

2022-11-17 Thread Robert Sparks
Apologies - an upload fumble left -00 empty. I've revised it to have content at -01. RjS On 11/17/22 4:36 PM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-15

2022-11-17 Thread Robert Sparks
On 11/17/22 4:44 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: Apologies - an upload fumble left -00 empty. I've revised it to have content at -01. Which I'll also paste here for convenience: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-08

2022-11-17 Thread Linda Dunbar via Datatracker
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more informatio