[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06

Paul: > Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06 > Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat > Review Date: 2022-10-25 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-28 > IESG Telechat date: ? > > Summary: > > This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. > > Issues: > > Major: 0 > Minor: 1 > Nits:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06

Russ, On 10/25/22 2:20 PM, Russ Housley wrote: Paul: Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2022-10-25 IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-28 IESG Telechat date: ? Summary: This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. Issues: Ma

Re: [Gen-art] [lamps] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06

Paul: >>> 1) MINOR: In Section 4.1 (Extension Format): >>> >>> The following: >>> >>> "CAs SHOULD use the one-way hash function that is associated with the >>> certificate signature to compute the hash value, and CAs MAY include other >>> hash values." >>> >>> introduces the possibility that

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-07

Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information,