Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready
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Picking on this e-mail as it is the most recent of those relating to
nsf-facing -17 and not because this has anything to do with Genart
-17 has introduced a number of errors as a result of changes (which is
why I was unenthusiastic about the comments made on -16).
It will take me quite a whil
Hi Tom,
As you may know, I as the editor of those I-Ds need to address the comments
from
the IETF community for preparing for the IESG review.
If you have specific comments on I2NSF YANG Data Model Drafts
to improve them, please let me know.
Thanks.
Best Regards,
Paul
On Wed, Jan 26, 2022 at 10
Hi Ben, all,
Thank you for zooming on these two points.
Please see below.
Cheers,
Med
> -Message d'origine-
> De : Dots De la part de Benjamin Kaduk
> Envoyé : mercredi 26 janvier 2022 01:59
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET
> Cc : last-c...@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-d
Hi Paul,
Thank you for your answer and for addressing my comments. I am fine with
all your proposed changes, with one observation.
> => [PAUL] RFC 8329 (Framework for Interface to Network Security Function)
is an
Informational RFC. If RFC 8329 is moved to Normative Reference, the ID-NITS
tool
(ht
Dan,
I see.
Thanks for your kind guide.
Best Regards,
Paul
2022년 1월 27일 (목) 오전 12:44, Dan Romascanu 님이 작성:
> Hi Paul,
>
> Thank you for your answer and for addressing my comments. I am fine with
> all your proposed changes, with one observation.
>
> > => [PAUL] RFC 8329 (Framework for Interface
Hi Cheng,
Thank you for the document update, this addresses my comments.
Best,
Reese (Theresa)
On 1/24/22 00:39, Chengli (Cheng Li) wrote:
Hi Theresa,
Many thanks for your reply! We have updated to address your comments. Please
see my reply inline for more information. Hope it address your
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready
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Hi!
From: Dan Romascanu
Sent: Wednesday, January 26, 2022 10:44 AM
To: Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Cc: General Area Review Team ; i2...@ietf.org; Last Call
; draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [I2nsf] Genart last call review of
draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-d
