[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-12

Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more i

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-12

Hi Peter, Thank you for the review. An updated version with changes to address you review can be seen at: https://github.com/boucadair/draft-ietf-dots-discovery/blob/master/draft-ietf-dots-server-discovery-12.txt A diff is also available here: https://tinyurl.com/dots-discovery-peter Plea