Re: [Gen-art] [lamps] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-update-alg-id-protect-03

2020-08-26 Thread Russ Housley
Peter: > Nits/editorial comments: > > Page 2, section 1, 2nd paragraph, last sentence: change "associate" to > "associated". Done. > Page 4, 1st NEW block, 4th sentence: insert "the" before "signedAttrs field". Fixed. > Page 5, section 3.5, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert "the" before "sa

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-cert-delegation-03

2020-08-26 Thread Ines Robles via Datatracker
Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-mode-6-cmds-09

2020-08-26 Thread Alissa Cooper
Vijay, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jul 6, 2020, at 1:18 PM, Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) revie