Hi Linda,
Thank You for the review! Please see inline.
>Section 1.4.1: the first paragraph is very confusing. The steps after the
>figure is much clear on what to be done. It is better to delete the the
>sub-phrase "... where the registrar informs the UAC about the
> authorization ..
Christer,
Thank you for the quick response. Your updated wording are much more clear.
Linda
-Original Message-
From: Christer Holmberg
Sent: Tuesday, April 14, 2020 9:25 AM
To: Linda Dunbar ; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of
draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-t
