Many thanks for your review Peter!
I applied all your typo fix suggestions that are not discussed below.
> Page 14, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence: change “a same” to one of “any”, “any
> single”, or something similar. These suggestions are based on the assumption
> that fragments from disparate da
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-sdi-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20200212
IETF LC End Date: 20200218
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Almost Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: crypto use details are missing. IMHO it is a problem of
presen
iewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20200212
> IETF LC End Date: 20200218
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
>
> Summary: Almost Ready
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: crypto use details are missing. IMHO it is a problem of
> presentation, I propose:
> -
Hi Joe -
Thanks for the heads up. I haven't been following this and am just
starting to read the threads on tsvwg, so apologies if my question below
has already been addressed.
On 2/17/20 5:09 PM, Joe Touch wrote:
FYI to the ARTs involved.
Discussion appears to at least be started in TSVW
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Hi Erik,
Thank you for your review. Responses inline.
Thanks,
David
On Mon, Feb 17, 2020 at 4:38 PM Erik Kline via Datatracker
wrote:
[snip]
> Are any of the recommendations for client resolvers in this document
> covered the IPR (https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/3077/) claimed for:
>
> h
On Tue, 18 Feb 2020 at 12:43, David Schinazi wrote:
>
> Hi Erik,
>
> Thank you for your review. Responses inline.
>
> Thanks,
> David
>
>
> On Mon, Feb 17, 2020 at 4:38 PM Erik Kline via Datatracker
> wrote:
> [snip]
>>
>> Are any of the recommendations for client resolvers in this document
>> c
Reviewer: Dale Worley
Review result: Ready with Issues
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