Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mboned-deprecate-interdomain-asm-05

2019-12-22 Thread Tim Chown
Hi, Thanks for the review Dale, comments in-line... > On 21 Dec 2019, at 21:10, Dale Worley via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Dale Worley > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF doc

Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-06

2019-12-22 Thread Ludwig Seitz
Hello Elwyn, I have now submitted -09 to fix the minor issues and nits, which I forgot in my -08. Comments inline. Regards, Ludwig On 2019-12-14 23:46, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker wrote: Minor issues: ss3.1, 3.2 and 4.1:  The COSE_Key type 'EC' used in several kty fields is not defined. 

Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-06

2019-12-22 Thread elwynd
Hi, Ludwig.Having had another look at section 3.1 of draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession, technically the rules about which keys have to be present are not part of the syntax of the cnf claim.  The point can be covered by changing '"syntax of the 'cnf' claim"to "syntax and semantics of the '