Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-06

2019-12-17 Thread Ludwig Seitz
Hello Elwyn, thank you for your review. Comments inline. /Ludwig On 2019-12-14 23:46, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-cellar-ebml-14

2019-12-17 Thread Alissa Cooper
Robert, thanks for your reviews of this document. I entered a No Objection ballot, supporting Adam’s DISCUSS about the abstract and requesting direct responses to Gen-ART reviews by email in the future. More below. > On Dec 16, 2019, at 8:49 AM, Alexey Melnikov > wrote: > > Hi Robert, > > Th

Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-15

2019-12-17 Thread Alissa Cooper
David, thanks for your review. Panos, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot. There will not be further Gen-ART reviews. Alissa > On Oct 8, 2019, at 2:37 PM, Panos Kampanakis (pkampana) > wrote: > > Thanks David. Done. I replaced the RFC7525 references with BCP195. > > S

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-certificate-compression-07

2019-12-17 Thread Alissa Cooper
Peter, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Dec 9, 2019, at 5:10 PM, Peter Yee via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all I

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-09

2019-12-17 Thread Greg Mirsky
Hi Erik, thank you for your reviews and for sharing thoughts on the selection of the destination IPv6 address. Following recommendations from Adam, I've updated the document to use the proper representation of IPv6 addresses and refer to them as "IPv4-mapped IPv4 loopback addresses". These updates

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-03

2019-12-17 Thread Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-nsh-bgp-control-plane-12

2019-12-17 Thread Alissa Cooper
Brian, thanks for your reviews of this document. Adrian, thanks for addressing Brian’s comments. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Dec 13, 2019, at 6:05 PM, Brian E Carpenter > wrote: > > Hi, > > For the record, the -13 version addresses all my comments. > > Thanks > Brian Car

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-ra-pref64-07

2019-12-17 Thread Alissa Cooper
Joel, thanks for your review of this document. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Nov 8, 2019, at 9:59 PM, Joel Halpern via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (

Re: [Gen-art] [MBONED] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mboned-driad-amt-discovery-09

2019-12-17 Thread Alissa Cooper
Dan, thanks for your review. Jake, thanks for making the changes. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Dec 3, 2019, at 3:31 PM, Dan Romascanu wrote: > > Hi Jake, > > Thanks for addressing these issues. > > No further comments. > > Regards, > > Dan > > > On Tue, Dec 3, 2019 at