[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dmm-lma-controlled-mag-params-03.txt

2017-02-27 Thread Francis Dupont
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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dmm-lma-controlled-mag-params-03.txt

2017-02-27 Thread Sri Gundavelli (sgundave)
Thanks Francis. On 2/27/17, 3:30 AM, "Francis Dupont" wrote: >I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >like any other last call comment

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dmm-lma-controlled-mag-params-03.txt

2017-02-27 Thread Dhananjay Patki (dhpatki)
Thanks Francis. We will address the comments and upload in a day or two. Regards, Dhananjay Sent from Samsung Mobile Original message From: "Sri Gundavelli (sgundave)" Date:27/02/2017 23:42 (GMT+05:30) To: Francis Dupont , gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-dmm-lma-controlled-mag

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-anima-grasp-09

2017-02-27 Thread Toerless Eckert
Thanks, Joel! On Sat, Feb 25, 2017 at 11:41:15AM -0800, Joel Halpern wrote: > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IE

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-dane-smime-15

2017-02-27 Thread Dale R. Worley
Dale Worley in his review: > 2. Presumably it was deliberate not to have the first label for an > SNAMEA record be the canonical UTF-8 string for the local-part, even > though the DNS architecture (RFC 1035) seems to admit binary labels. > 3. Location of the SMIMEA Record > >The DNS does not

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-14

2017-02-27 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dmm-lma-controlled-mag-params-03.txt

2017-02-27 Thread Dhananjay Patki (dhpatki)
Hi Francis, Please see inline responses. Also, please find attached version 04 of the draft attached to this email. I will upload the new version once you approve the rework. Or would you want the updated draft to be uploaded first? Let me know if you have any further comments. -- Thanks, Dhana

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dmm-lma-controlled-mag-params-03.txt

2017-02-27 Thread Suresh Krishnan
> On Feb 27, 2017, at 11:16 PM, Dhananjay Patki (dhpatki) > wrote: > > Hi Francis, > > Please see inline responses. Also, please find attached version 04 of the > draft attached to this email. I will upload the new version once you approve > the rework. Or would you want the updated draft to