Re: [Gen-art] Generate review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-gre-in-udp-encap-16

2016-08-15 Thread Black, David
Hi Jouni, Three quick responses: IPv6 NATs - Ah, now I see the concern. We'll rewrite the middlebox material on IPv6 zero checksums to avoid using NATs as examples. The "MUST" for the "MAY" requirement in RFC 6936 (#9) doesn't do anything aside from telling people to go read that requirement

[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2016-08-15

2016-08-15 Thread A. Jean Mahoney
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: Reviewer LC end Draft - Meral Shirazipour 2016-08-25 draft-ietf-hip-multihoming-10 Orit Levin2016-08-25 draft-ietf-hip-rfc5206-bis-12 Paul Kyzivat

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-bess-ir-04

2016-08-15 Thread Eric C Rosen
Thanks for your review. On 8/9/2016 4:41 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: it will be unlikely that a new implementer, schooled in the subject matter, will be able to create a correct implementation. The material in this draft describes running code. There are at least two independent, interoperable

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-bess-ir-04

2016-08-15 Thread Paul Kyzivat
On 8/15/16 2:50 PM, Eric C Rosen wrote: Thanks for your review. On 8/9/2016 4:41 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: it will be unlikely that a new implementer, schooled in the subject matter, will be able to create a correct implementation. The material in this draft describes running code. There are

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-bess-ir-05

2016-08-15 Thread Paul Kyzivat
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please s

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC2/Telechat review of draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-24

2016-08-15 Thread Ben Campbell
Hi Elwyn: Responsible AD Hat on: I'm going to enter a DISCUSS position, to make sure this point gets discussion among the IESG before this progresses. The whole point of the repeated last call was to get feedback on the downref, and this certainly counts :-) All hats off: As an individual

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC2/Telechat review of draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-24

2016-08-15 Thread Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)
Hi - I agree with Ben on all points. One inline point that bears reinforcement: > I believe the working group intent was that the definitions stated in RFC > 7206 are the ones used in the protocol. This is exactly right. In fact, this was a very tedious and drawn out process where we had to