[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-sweet-rfc2911bis-09

2016-07-26 Thread Russ Housley
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-sweet-rfc2911bis-09

2016-07-26 Thread Michael Sweet
Russ, Thank you for reviewing this (admittedly long) document. Responses to your questions and comments are inline below... > On Jul 26, 2016, at 2:36 PM, Russ Housley wrote: > ... > Major Concerns: > > It seems that [PWG5100.12] specifies IPP Version 2.0, 2.1, and 2.2. Why > is this documen