[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of 04 draft-ietf-appsawg-http-problem-01

2015-11-30 Thread Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
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[Gen-art] Telechat Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-ippm-checksum-trailer-05

2015-11-30 Thread Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-dat-metric-08

2015-11-30 Thread Paul Kyzivat
Henning, OK. I'm now happy with -10. Thanks, Paul On 11/26/15 7:30 AM, Henning Rogge wrote: Am 25.11.2015 um 16:11 schrieb Paul Kyzivat: Henning, I'm not trying to second guess the intent. My issues are solely with the presentation. And clearly this is not a subject I'm knowl

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-11

2015-11-30 Thread Matt Miller (mamille2)
The changes look good to me, and address all of my nits. Thanks Yu! -- - m&m Matt Miller Cisco Systems, Inc. > On Nov 26, 2015, at 02:13, Yu Fu wrote: > > Hi Matt, > > Thanks for your review. All the nits have been corrected in the updated > version. > > Thanks again > > BR > Yu > >

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-dat-metric-10

2015-11-30 Thread Paul Kyzivat
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Re: [Gen-art] Assignments for the 2015-12-03 Telechat

2015-11-30 Thread A. Jean Mahoney
Late addition: Robert Sparks2015-11-23 draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc6598-rfc6303-05 ** Jean On 11/25/15 5:19 PM, A. Jean Mahoney wrote: Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: Reviewer LC end Draft -

[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2015-11-30

2015-11-30 Thread A. Jean Mahoney
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: Reviewer LC end Draft - Elwyn Davies 2015-12-09 draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-39 draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-dot-x-39

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Last Call/Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-mib-variable-export-09

2015-11-30 Thread Paul Aitken
Elwyn, Hi Colin and Paul. Thanks for your responses. I think -10 clears up most of the points below. There is one point and a query that don't seem to be addressed: s5.4.2, last para and Figure 5: It would be helpful to remind people that the value 0x/65535 indicates variable length

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Last Call/Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-mib-variable-export-09

2015-11-30 Thread Elwyn Davies
Hi. Thanks for the response. I think that the suggested text for s5.7.2 is fine. To be clear, on s5.4.2 and s8, the point I was trying to get across is that the variable length encoding is a MAY/RECOMMENDED. Accordingly agents can alternatively use a fixed length encoding. I was suggesting