Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-dc-2xlat-01

2015-10-08 Thread Christer Holmberg
Hi Tore, I am happy with your suggestions on how to address my comments :) Thanks! Regards, Christer -Original Message- From: Tore Anderson [mailto:t...@redpill-linpro.com] Sent: 7. lokakuuta 2015 12:54 To: Christer Holmberg Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-dc-2xlat@too

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-ospf-node-admin-tag-06: A-D issues

2015-10-08 Thread Shraddha Hegde
Thanks David for the follow-up. Pls find details below. [...Snip to open comments...] David> Please add that statement, specifically that a receiver may have David> to ignore tags that do not match any local policies. Updated as below. "If a receiving node does not understand the tag value o

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-ospf-node-admin-tag-06 - Editorial comments and nits

2015-10-08 Thread Shraddha Hegde
> -- 3.1. TLV format > >Type : TBA, Suggested value 10 > > Please add an RFC Editor Note asking the RFC Editor to replace this > with the actual IANA-assigned value. > Does the RFC Editor Note go as part of this document. Yes, e.g.: **RFC Editor: Please replace above TBA with the actual

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-mglt-ipsecme-clone-ike-sa-05.txt

2015-10-08 Thread Daniel Migault
Hi Joel, Thank you for taking time to review and comment the draft. We propose to add the following text to clarify the example in section 2 before the two last paragraphs. The following text expects to clarify the following points: - 1) The creation of VPN is a local policy matter - 2)

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ospf-rfc4970bis-04

2015-10-08 Thread Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.t

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-mglt-ipsecme-clone-ike-sa-05.txt

2015-10-08 Thread Joel M. Halpern
That would work very well for me. Thank you for addressing my concerns. Yours, Joel On 10/8/15 10:20 AM, Daniel Migault wrote: Hi Joel, Thank you for taking time to review and comment the draft. We propose to add the following text to clarify the example in section 2 before the two last para

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-ospf-node-admin-tag-06: A-D issues

2015-10-08 Thread Black, David
Shradda, We're very close to done here, thanks for the updated text. I have one more concern on information completeness vs. tag removal (I'll deal w/[1] and the new Operational Considerations text in a separate message): The last paragraph in Section 3.2 of the proposed-for-07 text says: On

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-ospf-node-admin-tag-06: [1] Operational Considerations

2015-10-08 Thread Black, David
The new Operational Considerations text that Shradda sent out looks good. I'd like to make one small change to avoid overusing the concept of preference/preferred: Defining language for local policies is outside the scope of this document. As in case of other policy applications, the pruni

[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2015-10-08

2015-10-08 Thread A. Jean Mahoney
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: Reviewer LC end Draft - Peter Yee 2015-10-15 draft-ietf-pals-ms-pw-protection-03 Ralph Droms 2015-10-19 draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd-02 Rober

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-ospf-node-admin-tag-06: [1] Operational Considerations

2015-10-08 Thread Acee Lindem (acee)
Hi Bruno, Did you see the action item below? It seems we are very close. Thanks, Acee On 10/8/15, 2:03 PM, "Black, David" wrote: >The new Operational Considerations text that Shradda sent out looks good. > >I'd like to make one small change to avoid overusing the concept of >preference/prefer

[Gen-art] Assignments for the 2015-10-15 Telechat

2015-10-08 Thread A. Jean Mahoney
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: ReviewerLC end Draft -- Alexey Melnikov 2015-04-08 draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-12 * Brian Carpenter 2015-10-08 draft-ietf-bess-mvpn

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-blanchet-ccsds-urn-00

2015-10-08 Thread Meral Shirazipour
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-blanchet-ccsds-

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ospf-rfc4970bis-04

2015-10-08 Thread Acee Lindem (acee)
Hi Dan, Thanks for the review - please see inline. From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" mailto:droma...@avaya.com>> Date: Thursday, October 8, 2015 at 12:15 PM To: General Area Review Team mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>> Cc: "draft-ietf-ospf-rfc4970bis@tools.ietf.org

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-pwe3-iccp-stp-04

2015-10-08 Thread Mingui Zhang
Hi Brian, Andy, Thanks for the suggestion! I will add that description. Mingui > -Original Message- > From: Andrew G. Malis [mailto:agma...@gmail.com] > Sent: Thursday, October 01, 2015 8:35 AM > To: Brian E Carpenter > Cc: draft-ietf-pwe3-iccp-stp@ietf.org; General Area Review Team

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-ospf-node-admin-tag-06: [1] Operational Considerations

2015-10-08 Thread Shraddha Hegde
David, Defining language for local policies is outside the scope of this document. As in case of other policy applications, the pruning policies can cause the path to be completely removed from forwarding OLD plane, hence are less preferred than the preference policies. NEW plane,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-ospf-node-admin-tag-06: A-D issues

2015-10-08 Thread Shraddha Hegde
David, Pls see inline... -Original Message- From: Black, David [mailto:david.bl...@emc.com] Sent: Thursday, October 08, 2015 11:21 PM To: Shraddha Hegde ; Rob Shakir ; a...@cisco.com; bruno.decra...@orange.com; ops-...@ietf.org; General Area Review Team (gen-art@ietf.org) ; lizhen...@h

Re: [Gen-art] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ospf-rfc4970bis-06.txt

2015-10-08 Thread Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
Thank you for addressing my comments in a fast and efficient manner. Regards, Dan > -Original Message- > From: Acee Lindem (acee) [mailto:a...@cisco.com] > Sent: Friday, October 09, 2015 4:04 AM > To: OSPF WG List > Cc: Romascanu, Dan (Dan) > Subject: FW: New Version Notification for d