Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-ospf-node-admin-tag-06

David, Thanks a lot for your detailed review and comments. Here are the details of responses. I have also attached the updated document. Major issues: [1] Operational considerations: There appears to be more than enough enabled by this draft to wreak serious operational havoc, bu

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-ospf-node-admin-tag-06

Shraddha, David, > From: Shraddha Hegde [mailto:shrad...@juniper.net] > Sent: Wednesday, October > 07, 2015 9:08 AM [...] > -- 4.5. Explicit routing policy > > In Figure 3: > - The link from the leftmost pair of A nodes to the pair of T nodes >do not have link weights. [Bruno] There is s

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-dc-2xlat-01

Hi again Christer, and thanks again for reviewing! * Christer Holmberg > Section 2 (Terminology): > -- > > Q2_1: Many of the definitions have been defined in > draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-dc. Now they are re-defined, and sometimes with > a little different wording. > > Fo

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam-01

Hello Dan, Thank you very much for your review! My comments are in-line. * "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" > 1. In the second paragraph of the Introduction I suggest s/The > Explicit Address Mapping Table does not replace/Translation using the > Explicit Address Mapping Table does not replace/ Im

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-cdni-media-type-03.txt

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-ospf-node-admin-tag-06: A-D issues

David> Inline. I'll deal with the A-D issues here and the editorial David> items/nits in a separate message. > David, > > Thanks a lot for your detailed review and comments. > [... snip ...] > --- Minor issues: > > -- 3.2 Elements of procedure: > > [A] I see what look like some unders

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-ospf-node-admin-tag-06 - Editorial comments and nits

Most of the nits/editorial comments are fine. Two follow-ups: > -- 3.1. TLV format > >Type : TBA, Suggested value 10 > > Please add an RFC Editor Note asking the RFC Editor to replace this with the > actual IANA-assigned value. > Does the RFC Editor Note go as part of this document. Yes,