Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-node-protection-05

2015-09-15 Thread IJsbrand Wijnands
Hi Elwyn, First of all, thanks for the great comments. See a few responses inline below. I’ll submit the new version now, hope it addresses all your comments. > In particular, there doesn't seem to be any explanation of why the PLRs and > MPTs have to be directly connected to the protected nod

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label-05

2015-09-15 Thread Jari Arkko
Thank you very much Robert again for the review. I have placed a no-objection position for this document in the upcoming IESG telechat. Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.or

[Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-node-protection-06

2015-09-15 Thread Elwyn Davies
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review: draft-mm-netconf-time-capability-08

2015-09-15 Thread Tal Mizrahi
Hi Robert, > The document doesn't reflect the email discussion we had around how > certain 3rd parties can cancel commands. I encourage adding at least a > sentence reminding implementers and experimenting operators to remember > that they can. Based on this email discussion we have added the las