[Gen-art] Gen-art 2nd LC review of draft-ietf-payload-vp8-16

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[Gen-art] Gen-art 2nd LC review of draft-ietf-payload-vp8-16 (with summary)

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-wkumari-dhc-capport-13

> "Warren" == Warren Kumari writes: Warren>On Saturday, July 11, 2015, Christian Huitema Warren> Warren>wrote: Warren> On Saturday, July 11, 2015 8:50 AM, joel jaeggli wrote >> ... [5] Section 5: >> >> Fake DHCP servers / fake RAs are currently a s

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-wkumari-dhc-capport-13

Okey dokey, I'm happy to add something. Does anyone have any suggested text? W On Monday, July 13, 2015, Sam Hartman wrote: > > "Warren" == Warren Kumari > writes: > > Warren>On Saturday, July 11, 2015, Christian Huitema > Warren> > > Warren>wrote: > > Warren>

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art 2nd LC review of draft-ietf-payload-vp8-16

(+payload and Harald) Elwyn: Thanks for the detailed review! Authors: Please address Elwyn's comments at your earliest convenience. There's quite a bit here, and I assume we will need a new revision before taking this to the IESG telechat, but it would be helpful to discuss any proposed chang