Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er-05

2014-09-04 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for your review, Meral Jari On 29 Aug 2014, at 03:23, Meral Shirazipour wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at < > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from you

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-forces-model-extension-04

2014-09-04 Thread Jari Arkko
Ben, Haleplidis, Adrian - thank you for your review, changes, and attention on this topic. Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-forces-protoextension-04

2014-09-04 Thread Jari Arkko
Thank you, all! Jari On 07 Aug 2014, at 23:18, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > Jamal, > > I am OK with all your suggested changes. > > Thanks > Brian Carpenter > > On 07/08/2014 23:07, Jamal Hadi Salim wrote: >> Hi Brian, >> Thanks for taking the time to review. Responses inline.. >> >> On Thu

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03

2014-09-04 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks. Will the document be updated per this? Jari On 18 Aug 2014, at 20:35, Martin Thomson wrote: > On 17 August 2014 23:09, Juergen Schoenwaelder > wrote: >> >> can we get things unstuck with the following NEW text replacing the >> first paragraph in the security considerations section in

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-savi-dhcp-29

2014-09-04 Thread Ted Lemon
Thanks for the careful review, Elwyn. The document is undergoing a new english language pass and some additional rework. I've pushed the document out to the next telechat because that work isn't done yet and I think addressing the points you've raised will make the document easier for the IE

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-savi-dhcp-29

2014-09-04 Thread Elwyn Davies
Ack. Will look for the updated version (and I guess rereview!) /Elwyn On 04/09/14 16:16, Ted Lemon wrote: Thanks for the careful review, Elwyn. The document is undergoing a new english language pass and some additional rework. I've pushed the document out to the next telechat because tha

Re: [Gen-art] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-core-groupcomm-24.txt

2014-09-04 Thread Rahman, Akbar
Hi Ben, Thanks for closing all the major issues. Below are Esko's and my responses to your remaining minor issues and nits (identified by "[Author's reply]"). Please write back if you have any further questions. Best Regards, Akbar & Esko -Original Message- From: Ben Campbell [

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-jose-json-web-algorithms-31

2014-09-04 Thread Mike Jones
Thanks for the review, Roni. I'm also cc'ing the working group so they're aware of your review. Replies are inline below... From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even@gmail.com] Sent: Monday, September 01, 2014 4:47 AM To: draft-ietf-jose-json-web-algorithms@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: i

[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2014-09-04

2014-09-04 Thread A. Jean Mahoney
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: Reviewer LC end Draft - Brian Carpenter 2014-09-30 draft-kyzivat-case-sensitive-abnf-01 I have made the assignments in the review tool: http://art.tools.iet

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-savi-dhcp-29

2014-09-04 Thread Fred Baker (fred)
Sure On Sep 5, 2014, at 1:16 AM, Ted Lemon wrote: > Thanks for the careful review, Elwyn. The document is undergoing a new > english language pass and some additional rework. I've pushed the document > out to the next telechat because that work isn't done yet and I think > addressing the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-jose-json-web-algorithms-31

2014-09-04 Thread Roni Even
Hi Mike, Inline Roni From: Mike Jones [mailto:michael.jo...@microsoft.com] Sent: 04 September, 2014 10:31 PM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-jose-json-web-algorithms@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: i...@ietf.org; j...@ietf.org Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-jose-json-web-alg