Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tls-oob-pubkey-09

2013-10-18 Thread Hannes Tschofenig
Hi Christer, thanks for the detailed review. It provided good feedback to improve the readability of the document. I have taken your comments into the account with the most recent draft update. On the example you are right that we introduced a copy-and-paste error here. We had changed the ex

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-multi-topology-09.txt

2013-10-18 Thread Joel M. Halpern
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-multi-topology-09.t

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-siprec-architecture-08

2013-10-18 Thread Hutton, Andrew
Hi Russ, An update to this draft has been posted and I believe it addresses your comments. See http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-siprec-architecture-09.txt Regards Andy > -Original Message- > From: Russ Housley [mailto:hous...@vigilsec.com] > Sent: 23 September 2013 23:0

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-clue-telepresence-use-cases-07

2013-10-18 Thread Roni Even
Hi Kathleen, Thanks for the review. See inline Roni > -Original Message- > From: gen-art-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf > Of Moriarty, Kathleen > Sent: 19 September, 2013 6:44 PM > To: draft-ietf-clue-telepresence-use-cases@tools.ietf.org; i...@iesg.org; >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-clue-telepresence-use-cases-07

2013-10-18 Thread Moriarty, Kathleen
Roni, Thank you for making the changes. Best regards, Kathleen -Original Message- From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even@gmail.com] Sent: Friday, October 18, 2013 11:11 AM To: Moriarty, Kathleen; draft-ietf-clue-telepresence-use-cases@tools.ietf.org; i...@iesg.org; gen-art@ietf.org

Re: [Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2013-10-17

2013-10-18 Thread A. Jean Mahoney
Hi all, Change in assignments - Meral will be reviewing draft-ietf-ipfix-mediation-protocol. Thanks, Jean On 10/17/13 4:29 PM, A. Jean Mahoney wrote: Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: Reviewer LC end Draft --

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-03

2013-10-18 Thread Meral Shirazipour
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts