Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-07

2024-04-12 Thread Susan Hares
Neil: Thank you for your prompt response. All of the revisions are fine with me. Two other comments may be helpful to you: 1. You might want to send the formatting issues to the RFC editor and to the IETF tools team. 1. On #14 below (copied below for quick email reading) – The requir

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-07

2024-04-11 Thread Neil Jenkins
Hi Susan, Thank you for your review. I have published an updated draft addressing your comments, details below. > 1. Section 1.5.1, paragraph 1 > Why: Sentence structure makes the reference unclear > > Old text:/ >Represents