Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cbor-cddl-control-05

2021-10-18 Thread Lars Eggert
Theresa, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On 2021-9-16, at 21:12, Theresa Enghardt via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Theresa Enghardt > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The Gen

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cbor-cddl-control-05

2021-09-17 Thread Theresa Enghardt
Hi Carsten, Thanks for the reply and changes, they look good to me. On 9/17/21 8:28 AM, Carsten Bormann wrote: Section 7 (Security considerations): Can there be any additional security concerns if CDDL specifications can contain ABNF or "arbitrary" features? While this document obviously can't

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cbor-cddl-control-05

2021-09-17 Thread Carsten Bormann
Hi Theresa, thank you for your review, which highlights a number of needed improvements. > Minor issues: > > Section 1: > Please consider adding a brief description of what a control operator is, how > it can be used, and what its components are. I’m not so sure about that. This document reall