Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-svcb-https-07

2021-08-23 Thread Dale R. Worley
Ben Schwartz writes: >> This section uses "vector" in three places where "form" or "example" >> would likely be better. > > "Test vector" is a standard phrase in this context, e.g. > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc6716#appendix-A.4 OK. I've censused the nouns and noun phrases used for

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-svcb-https-07

2021-08-16 Thread Ben Schwartz
-last-call Thanks for the detailed review, Dale. I've posted a proposed change to incorporate most of your comments: https://github.com/MikeBishop/dns-alt-svc/pull/335 On Sat, Aug 14, 2021 at 7:34 AM Dale Worley via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Technical issues: > > Whereas SRV reco

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-svcb-https-07

2021-08-14 Thread Dale Worley via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more