Hi Roni,
Thanks for your review and your comments. We will re-organize the text in
the introduction section as suggested by you for a better flow - this will
be posted in the next update.
Regarding the terminology section, we've followed the practice of expanding
in-line on first use. Note that t
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits
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