[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ntp-checksum-trailer-04

2016-02-23 Thread Paul Kyzivat
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-wallace-est-alt-challenge-04

2016-02-23 Thread Elwyn Davies
Hi, Carl. Thanks for the response. Pending the publication of an updated draft, if you have a snapshot of the updated version, I am happy to run my eye over the changes. I would be particularly interested to have a look at what you propose for the last sentence of s4. As regards the CSR stu