Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Last Call/Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-mib-variable-export-09

Hi Elwyn, Many thanks for the review, agree this one is a little dry :-) Please see below for the replies to your comments. The changes have been made for draft 10. PJ: Paul Aitken CM: Colin McDowall Thanks, Colin and Paul >I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-dat-metric-08

[In progress - not ready for sending] I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, p

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draf

[Gen-art] Gem-Art Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draf

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-josefsson-scrypt-kdf-03

I did want to comment on one other thing: >>> (Issue-4): Identifiers reused for different meanings In scrypt, "B" is an array of "p" vectors, each of which is 128*r octets. In scryptROMix, "B" is a single vector of 128*r octets. In scryptBlockMix, "B" is a vector of 2*r 64-octet blocks. I'm

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-josefsson-scrypt-kdf-03

On 11/20/15 10:22 AM, Stephen Farrell wrote: (This combines the distributions for Simon's mail to gen-art and secdir. I think one thread responding to my question(s) below will work better.) +1 I was out of my depth reviewing this because I am not familiar with common practice in defining se

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-josefsson-scrypt-kdf-03

(This combines the distributions for Simon's mail to gen-art and secdir. I think one thread responding to my question(s) below will work better.) Hi Simon, all, Thanks for the reviews and updates. Does anyone think we need more review for this or is it now ready for IESG eval? Modulo one questi

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-josefsson-scrypt-kdf-03

Executive Summary: I have submitted https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-josefsson-scrypt-kdf-04 that (hopefully) resolve the gen-art and secdir feedback. Paul Kyzivat writes: > This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the > review. Hello Paul. I am sorry for the delay i