[Gen-art] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-wkumari-dhc-capport-15

2015-08-28 Thread Black, David
The Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of the -13 version of this draft does not appear to have been directly addressed in the -15 version. Of the 5 minor issues, other changes have addressed issue [4] and the first part of issue [5] (first chunk of quoted text). In addition, it's ok to treat issue [1] a

[Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-08

2015-08-28 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

[Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-node-protection-05

2015-08-28 Thread Elwyn Davies
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[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-precis-nickname-18

2015-08-28 Thread Paul Kyzivat
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause-08

2015-08-28 Thread Bo Burman
Thank you Meral! All of your proposed changes are good and will be addressed in the next version of the document. Cheers, Bo From: Meral Shirazipour [mailto:meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com] Sent: den 13 augusti 2015 20:31 To: draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-stream-pause@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org