[Emu] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-emu-aka-pfs-10

2023-03-12 Thread Linda Dunbar via Datatracker
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Emu] CSR Attributes (Re: Working group Last Call for RFC 7170bis)

2023-03-12 Thread Eliot Lear
On 10.03.23 18:54, Alexander Clouter wrote: On Fri, 10 Mar 2023, at 16:17, Eliot Lear wrote: In Section 4.2.9, the beginning text reads: The Request-Action TLV MAY be sent by both the peer and the server in response to a successful or failed Result TLV. I believe this text is overly restrict